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Gave this a playthrough. Had a damn good time but I'd like to note down a bunch of issues that you're doubtlessly already aware of (and hopefully some ones that you aren't!)

Objective trigger for the first mission is misplaced. I only discovered the "find the green portal" text after looping back while exploring the island.  Found the "Avoid Detection" marker this way too as it's only on one of the many possible routes to the mainland.

Water hazard around the level is a bit ill defined and comes out the ground in some places. Caught an enemy running through it but didn't catch on printscreen.

A LOT of objects are non collidable. I understand that some of this is to make the chase AI's job easier (Trees etc.) but when you fall through giant stuff like ships in the ocean it's kinda jarring. 

The AI also glitches out when you get to certain elevated spots. I'm fully aware that I'm being a parkour-y bastard (and it's rather easy to abuse geometry to get to places you shouldn't) but these spots are just beside (and sometimes IN) the normal playing field. These are places a regular player would try, not just a trickster like me.

It's also currently the best way of escaping enemies as they have an annoying tendency to either be too persistent and scooby doo chase you around the entire map or give up after you turn the first corner.

The strange usable diaper pack near the exit portal on the side of the main island is nonfunctional.

Not sure if this is intentional or not but enemies are almost completely invisible in the darkness. There's a nice example of good visibility in the long courtyard before you get to the mansion gates in the first level where the area is completely dark but the patrolling enemy's silohette contrasts nicely against the fog.  I see that you've added red rim lighting to them and glowing eyes and diaper tapes but it's very subtle. I also see that there's some quiet sounds for some nearby enemies (although I'm playing without headphones on, my PC's fans were like a jet engine and I just notice that I had the sound turned down so it's hard to tell if they're loud enough)

Obviously this issue (if it even is one) requires a lot of tweaking to get right so it's just something to keep in mind.

Saving and reloading resets everything (including your inventory) and it's completely disabled after the first level (possibly to avoid softlocking).

Enemies phase through doors instead of opening them.

If you crouch and fall off ledges in a certain way (hugging the wall), your playermodel clips through the camera.

The second and third levels have tons of copyrighted placeholders from Tykables to Abena to Johnson's powder.

The locker teleports mess up if you activate them from an odd position. (Usually climbing on furniture)

That wolf girl in the chase sequence isn't very good at keeping up. (and her diaper texture is a copyrighted placeholder from ABU)

The t-pose jumpscares are pretty lame. I *hope* that they're intended to be mostly comedic/sexy because jumpscares are rarely a good addition. Maybe OK as a "caught" animation though.

Anyway, I'd just like to say that - despite the obvious issues (it's an alpha, after all) - I was having a whale of a time.

The models are excellent and I like the 2d menu art too.

The atmosphere is SPOT ON (in the first level and in the resort level). I especially liked the rustling trees and shifting lighting (both spotlights and mystical glowing) in the first level.

You are well rewarded for exploring off the path and there's lots of nice little setpieces like the looming cooling tower in the background or the broken railways.

All the little nods to other horror games like the lantern and the herbs were cute.

The puzzle system is cool and I really enjoyed opening the lock box.

Definitely enjoyed the freeform stealth bits more than the heavily scripted chase sequences though.

So yeah. Please don't read this as me bashing the game, I see a lot of potential and it's clearly had serious passion put into it.

Anyway, here's the bit where I shamelessly suggest stuff for future content:

I really like the enemy models. Maybe sneaking about, trying to get a peek at them should be a mechanic? (Certainly what I was trying!) A bit like an inverted Amnesia: TDD.

If you win the game I think there should be a POV lapdance mode ...and maybe in general have sequences along the campaign that are like a sexy version of Outlast. (and if we're going full sexy Outlast mode, maybe the option to play as a male character?)

Ps. I've got a big 'ol .xcf file containing labelled screenshots of goofs (and a bunch of enemy shots that I liked) if you want it.

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This write up is great! Thanks so much I will review it as soon as I am rested up. As you probably already expect the lakeside island level is still in very early development, has a bunch of bad collission triggers and a duplicated door or two and a few bad placements. The enemy AI also has a bunch of problems I will be working hard to mitigate or solve.