Good twist at the end. I assume everything that’s happening is the man’s subconscious, isn’t it?
Until i understood what was happening, the jump from scene to scene felt jarring, in the sense that one moment i was about to clean the table—did i ever clean that up?—and the next was talking to the next customer, with just a sound effect that reminds me of a blooper reel. I imagine this was done in purpose.
My only complain is that the bartender moves too slowly, and seems to take forever to go to the table.