I think both versions of the song are pretty good. They definitely feel cohesive in themselves and they have interesting ideas and interesting timbre of the individual parts. While I think the individual instruments have a lot of effort put into them, and I could easily zone out to either in a menu while adjusting game settings or hearing these coming from an in game radio, I don't think you expanded on the ideas available in terms of composition. The songs are very static and dwell on the same repetitions for a while without providing much more than just a minor change up in beat or ambient tones. The DnB Mix definitely could benefit from some well placed rising tones and changes to the otherwise staccato bass line. If you wanted to keep the bass staccato throughout, some more varied melodic sections playing over it would have helped. Overall, good job though!
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Thank you for the feedback! I definitely agree with you about expanding the ideas and adding more content - I was working on a couple of different projects at the same time so I didn't put as much as I wanted two into both mixes. Drum fills, changes in the bassline, and chords that change throughout each track would make them a lot better.