i really loved the aesthetic. the pencil-like art style along with the music and story really made this game stand out. perfect length too, it didn't feel rambling or dragged out.
the story itself was lovely. it fit the theme perfectly imo.
the dialogue section between the keeper and two flames has a bug where the sequence will replay itself if you click the keeper again. nothing to rate down on of course, but just thought i'd mention it.
overall this was fantastic. great work with this :D