Don't rush (and take care) ! My character needs some rest before the next nightmare! :)
I'm not familiar with the Bizarro fiction but it sounds pretty interesting
It has a lot of potential but some people just use it as an excuse to really weird stories that don't need to be told LOL. I see it, kid's stories are full of imaginations and crazy plots that you don't know where they are going...that's what I like about it. They really avoid the classic tropes with endings.
I just read the chapter 2. It's weirder and sounds great! It's even weirder I don't understand all words (I'm not an English native speaker) but it's in a way part of my experience. Such as a dream I can't totally understand ahah :)
By reading your game I can tell I love Bizarro fiction! Thanks for your explanation of this