There's a great little concept for a game that you've demonstrated with this prototype, which I really hope you continue to work on and polish. I found the idea of writing your own story to be quite interesting, and then to have it literally turn into a game you play would be amazing. I did end up wondering around as a house xD and a Skunk killed me really easily (it was difficult to control the house). So for me you are demonstrating something really innovative here that has huge potential. I also loved your take on the Theme, turning 'Right from Wrong' into 'Write from Wrong' Great job on this and please continue to develop this!
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Thank you so much for this comment I was thinking of later making a reprised version but not as a platformer were your decisions in the book had a greater effect on the game more than just player,enemies and items. I was am going to achieve this feel by unbalancing the enemies so if you choose a book that say represents a dragon you will just straight up loose then you will remember for your next game lets not choose that one or use it in a context that is beneficial. Lastly I think I will make the selection for each section start before you enter that section so that you don't fill everything out at the beginning. Giving it more impact.