Loved the concept, indifferent about the execution. Your core idea of trying to put a fresh spin on a faction pays off in spades though, and will definitely stick with me, even if the story itself probably won't.
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In truth feel the same about the story, as the jam and writing proved more an exercise to share ideas for expanding on divergent lore than to do justice to theme in the very short time I had to work with. Seeing several good entries that also bring fresh perspectives, so hoping some of these sentiments stick even if the individual stories do not get continuation