- Disable the "Apply" button in the options menu when there are no changes.
- Why does switching menu tabs default to PgUp and PgDown? Why would I move my right hand over to the nav keys instead of just clicking the tab?
- You should be able to bind actions to the same key if there's no risk of them overlapping.
- The buttons on the main menu should be the same width as the black gradient.
- Just make the font size smaller instead of splitting sentences between lines.
- Right mouse button should go back in menus.
- The player runs like he shat his pants.
- Pausing should pause the play timer.
- The equipment screen should show all your equipped items somewhere so you don't have to click all the tabs to check.
- I don't like how your attacks knock enemies out of attack range.
Text errors:
Intro:
- "Wait right here, I'll go get them for you." - Comma splice. Why does it say "them" instead of "him"? Has the character never met his manager before?
- "T-thank you" --> "Th-Thank you"
- "Not while THEY are working here" - He's standing right there. Can she not tell the player character is a man?
- "But, obviously they left out the part..." - Get rid of the comma.
- "But sir" --> "But, Sir"
- "..and caused a scene-" - En dashes should have a space before them. Em dashes should not.
- "Oh wow, I didn't realize..." --> "Oh, wow. I didn't realize..."
- "Hello, welcome to Game Blast where our prices blast off to the moon!" --> "Hello! Welcome to Game Blast, where our prices blast off to the moon!"
- "Alright, well..." --> "Alright. Well..."
Rose:
- "Oh shit, it sounds like..." --> "Oh, shit. It sounds like..."
- "But, around smaller villages..." - Another pointless comma.