Great game honestly! The atmosphere was well done and I love the foreshadowing of the moose appearing on the moon for a second whenever he leaves you. The story of the game was very interesting and the good ending was farily satisfying! I appreciate that it wasn't too hard to figure out how to get the evil ending if you've already gotten the good ending, and vice versa. The evil ending does admitedly feel slightly anti climatic, and kinda feels more like a fail-state than a true ending, I think it would have been interesting to see the evil ending expanded on, maybe showing what happened to Eli and showing the chaos Apacheon would have caused. I did unfortunately notice that there were some minor typos in the game, like the wrong use of "you're", but that really doesn't affect the game too much. The game starts to make a lot more sense on a second playthrough which I think is interesting, although the ending is a little heavy on exposition but that's fine. The moose being evil was pretty obvious but I don't think it hurts the experience too much. Overall this is a very cool, short game with an interesting and unexpected story. I recommend it!
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hi there, thank you so much for playing! Admittedly, yes, the writing is not perfect and the endings are both quite similar which may make one seem underwhelming. This is my first real game project and, although I did try to create an effective story, I was much more focused on the art- which hopefully explains the lacking writing for anyone who noticed. I really appreciate the feedback and will look through the spelling to try to fix any mistakes! Again, really thank you for playing and taking the time to comment it means a lot to have something I worked so hard on appreciated!