Your art was *chef's kiss,* and picking up all of the little items was fun. I didn't enjoy the overall gameplay very much (although I should not be one to talk), but this was overall a really polished experience.
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I don't know that anything was inherently wrong with the gameplay, but I think one element that could have really spiced it up is a more detailed landscape. Things like traps, flora (or some empty bits of architecture), and pits would make shooting and collecting parts more engaging. Overall, it was a pretty good game, though, and it is definitely partially genre mismatch.