Hello! I made The Saint's Tomb and I'm just now discovering this. I love how you did the maps; it's a very intuitive design. The ability to change pronouns is also a nice touch. Lastly, the puzzle was nicely designed. I love the scaffolding: start easy and adds more complexity until the last question is actually difficult.
Thanks so much for your kind words! Playing The Saint’s Tomb with my partner back in 2021 was what inspired me to learn to use Twine in the first place, which makes it all the more special you’d give my game a go :D Looking forward to trying out Beyond The Vale of Darkness some time soon. All the best