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The game is interesting but may be held back by how limiting the engine is.

The music and sound effects are effective but not very noteworthy.
The graphics are probably a bit too sterile, the UI isn't very interesting although very clean. The mis mash of internet images doesn't give the game any cohesion in its art.
The idea and gameplay is interesting, alternating between the clicking phase and dungeon crawling is a good idea although it could have been unified better. What are you really doing when you gather pizza coins ? For exemple if we were playing some kind of mage we could be gathering our power while clicking, if it was accompanied by a good atmosphere it would make much more sense and be interesting. The fact that we don't even know how we are gathering these PizzaCoins is for me a big narrative hole.
The auto translated french is very cursed, for a game jam just stick to the game and gameplay before working on making your game accessible for different languages.

This is it for my comment, it may sound harsh but i actually gave you a fairly good rating, it's just that there are a lot of things that work but aren't very notable, that's why i didn't mention them in this comment.

Also if you have time could you please rate my game ? It would mean a lot to me!
Thank you.

Thank you for your constructive comment MrEloda!

I did spent enough time in the project to make something narratively enjoyable. I prepared all the stuff to make this possible by the chat but still, there is just the intro. For the UI, this is voluntary, I wanted to make a mix between "A dark Room" and "Armory and Machines" so really minimalistic. Pizzacoins are useful to buy weapons, skills and generators. I wanted to add powerups but again, no enough time 😪. I agree that I spent too enough time too make the translation and this is useless for the game jam even if I have a french community. Narrativly speaking, PizzaCoins are a crypto imagined by the player because the game is in a dream. And why Pizza? Well... because everyone love pizzas of course x)

I will rate your game 😉

Thank you again!