Auto translation s*ck, really, most of text are completely unreadable, better get rid of it. I'm clearly understand back in time moment. It's just, the man didn't recognize the fabric, but he's accept wiki and smartphone term without question, that's stupid no?
Most of your VN have really static model, if you multiple models with different face and body expression, it will bring much more "Live" in VN. Creating VN with not so much scenes, 2-3 models and a few words dialogue, that i call "Lowcost". How ever, you did a good job on special effects and some animation, but again with so static VN it's looks unplacebel.
You're seriously need hire a good writer. You text seems "simple", yeah i get it, that type of VN actually exist. But your text too simple and it's even few of it. Simple type of text can come in handy when you have too many models with diferent pose and face expression, many scene and a lot of movement. Thats you're clearly had not.
Motion-blur in VN are you insane? It's just a lots image and text (besides a few animation), there is no actual camera movement, only animation between them. Why do you need a blur everything that's not in focus if camera a static? The "Blur" i'm was talked about is on every models in VN, trying to cover up all not HD texture (everything).
Sorry i don't see any "AI features" are you talking about, maybe somewhere deeper in the game, but i can't make it. MC looks like combination of the body from the sex fantasy and head of Lara Croft who made a good plastic surgery to look a little ugler, plus Lore page in some basic text program with links to wiki in internet is enough for me to stop play, sry.