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That's exactly why i feeled something "wrong" when played your VN. It's your "film principles", it's closer to film then to novel. But film at least has 120 image per second, that is not something you can achieve in VN (for now). In film charapters described via their actions & words and how well the actors can "act" them. You can actually "see" it via record with bunch of frame, big actor work and montage. When creating VN you have to bring to live the puppets via their description, appearence, their thought, their respective to the world, how they see each other, their relationship and principles. It's only can be done via TEXT and you chose to get rid from most of it. You simple can't do that even with 1000 images over scene, no matter how good the graphic is (maybe in future it can be done, but for now we live in 21 century), that why it's at first Novel and only then Visual Novel afterwards. You need to describe their actions EVEN if it's show up on image, coz they are not actors they can't "act" to show their character, but only a puppet, they are not acting roles, but perfom actions that you describe.

SPOILER. 

For example we can take the first actualy scene, when Euryale met slaver and his slave. There is no description about what happen with slaver after what Euryale done with him, god there is no even description about why and how she do that, we can only imagine. Did he bleed to death after he pass out? Did he die immediately from pain shock? Did he pass out and survive some how? There is only one image with zero text and that all, he not even scream. If follow "film principles" there must be long scene with his scream and agony from pain, maybe some last words from typpical clishe villian, mb some epic phrase from MC. But no, there is no such scene. Thats don't feel "live" or "real", only some doll do something with other doll. BUT if you putt in that scene not so much words, it's all starts make sence, like - "Euryale tore off his balls from body, because he was filty scum and slaver. The man did not even understand what happened to him. He pass out from pain shock and die not long afterwards. Satisfied, Euryale stand over him and starts walking towards the man's former property". And thats all. All make sence, it feels like "living scene", not some one image with a lot of question afterward. You're not making a film here, you create a tale with pictures, hold your horses, the techology is not that advanced for now.

Auto translation s*ck, really, most of text are completely unreadable, better get rid of it. I'm clearly understand back in time moment. It's just, the man didn't recognize the fabric, but he's accept wiki and smartphone term without question, that's stupid no? 

Most of your VN have really static model, if you multiple models with different face and body expression, it will bring much more "Live" in VN. Creating VN with not so much scenes, 2-3 models and a few words dialogue, that i call "Lowcost". How ever, you did a good job on special effects and some animation, but again with so static VN it's looks unplacebel.

You're seriously need hire a good writer. You text seems "simple", yeah i get it, that type of VN actually exist. But your text too simple and it's even few of it. Simple type of text can come in handy when you have too many models with diferent pose and face expression, many scene and a lot of movement. Thats you're clearly had not.

Motion-blur in VN are you insane? It's just a lots image and text (besides a few animation), there is no actual camera movement, only animation between them. Why do you need a blur everything that's not in focus if camera a static? The "Blur" i'm was talked about is on every models in VN, trying to cover up all not HD texture (everything).

Sorry i don't see any "AI features" are you talking about, maybe somewhere deeper in the game, but i can't make it. MC looks like combination of the body from the sex fantasy and head of Lara Croft who made a good plastic surgery to look a little ugler, plus Lore page in some basic text program with links to wiki in internet is enough for me to stop play, sry.

When i launched this game and saw Russian language in preferences, i was excited.... only for a moment before i click on it. Delete it, really. Never in my life i'm laughed so hard. I'm never imagin that Russian on Russian is ПИКЧЬЮ (whatewer it is), Music is Musical tom, Auto-Foward Time is Self-guided time, Fullscrean is Fullscrean screan, and many other funny thing. It's not even google translate, maybe neural network, idk. Man i'm just wanna say ty, you made my day. Now i'm gona try to play your game.

P.S. Played it, nope, just nope. Really lowcost VN, soo static models, bad writing, all some kind of blurred, unpresentable. It's looks like alpha test of some really early build of some really cheap game. Voice acting is pointless, either make it full or don't make it at all. Make single scene either full static or full animated. Surounding is bad just like it's made from wax or plasticine. Face animation is allmoust at zero. I just had enough at the moument when - two really static people sat next to something that suppouse to be bonfire, but all i saw was big pile of animated smoke cover everything around, even theyr faces, but they dont care at all, surrounded by flat wax grass and talking about wiki on smartphone in 19 century without question. Realy?

I'm don't get it. How to dowload Ep.2-4? I'm see link only for Ep.1 Remaster.

This game is just perfect. I’m never ever play a game such good as this. Animation and visual in a level above all other VN. Story is good and more over LONG enough to actually enjoy it. Girls are really beautiful, but they all are conquered the same way – be nice with them, then they give you a blowjob. It’s actualy really sad. All girls appears on the start of the game and then no other. I’m dont say it’s a minus, but adding new girls later be really appreciated. It’s just feels like all other girls worse, coz they simple not in the list. 

I’m understand that VN storyrich and you don’t have so many space to add many different paths, but in this game you have only 5 type of answers. 1. Good answer (only one that give you something). 2. Bad answer (not evil but WRONG). 3. REALY bad answer (the same as the previous). 4. Question. 5. I’m out of here (don’t wanna go, no, not interested (you never sellect it coz it’s too dumb and mood killer)). Most of the choices are between 1,2 or 1,3 or 1,5 or 1,2,3 or 1,2,5. Most of the time (EVERYTIME) you select 1-st type coz, WHY THE HELL YOU WANNA RUIN THE MOOD? They don’t give you anything, they are just WRONG and nothing more. You will never see a choices between 1 and 1 or 2 and 3, there is ALLWAYS ONE and only ONE positive outcome (you can get out of anything). Very positive game, you can’t fuck up until you really want it (But why? I’m not some masochistic japanese). Really need some variation, like in the Alien episode (logs integration can be better), but this one is exception from other (IDK why, it’s feels like completely different style of writing). 

Results: Good and long positive storyrich VN, with many choices that not alter story itself, but give you some control over situation. Very high quality in every aspect, but have lack of consequences in your choices. Humor and memes are actually good, there is not so many of them (just enough to not overdo it), but they all hit the spot. Author have really good taste in culture, film and game, you prob don’t find anything strange, unknown or something you simple don’t like in integrations. Realy great job. I really enjoyed playing this game.

P.S. Sorry for my ENG. Special thanks for Николай из Екатеринбурга. I'm laugh really hard from that one, live near Ekaterinburg myself.