Oh man! Thank you so much for this feedback. I really wanted this kind of critical review. The art style is similar to Blackthornprod's.
As for the text, Godot has a RichTextLabel Node that is pretty useful but I just didn't have the time to implement a good font with it.
Moreover I have been working in Godot for a year and now thinking of switching to Unity. That's not because Godot is bad (I love Godot so much <3), but because Unity has a much larger community and a few more reasons.
If I feel like working more on this idea later then I do have some things to add, and I will definitely take your advice. :)
Can you help me with some Unity forums or Discord servers or QnA sites you recommend? That will be great help.
Again, Thanks a lot!