I love this game. I LOVE this game. I am a sucker for surreal and for text based games, and your writing is stellar. The music is such a perfect choice for the atmosphere, and the presentation is so clean and beautiful.
It honestly reminds me a lot of the stanley parable, as weird as that sounds. Something about the detached, surreal nature but still grounded in consequence.
Definitely going to be revisiting this one! You should extend this out even more!