Hey, just played through both chapters.
I concur with MeiZi, the way you described Freddy's experience with Gaspard was really hot, you surely got a knack for writing arousing things ^^
The addition you made between chapter 1 & 2 are really good. The pixel arts help make the experience less dry, and the choices give the player some agenda.
Overall really good narrative bit, would like to see more. Maybe offer more diverse perspective for a main character ? (male, futa, non-binary ?)