Grammar police here - I have some suggestions:
- player
- the players'
- bury
Hello, grammar is spelt with an "a" not an "e". A comma splice is when you use a comma to break up two clauses which make sense on their own (e.g. I like pizza, it is the best). Instead of a comma, you can either use two sentences (I like pizza. It is the best.) or a semi-colon (I like pizza; it is the best.)