Hello Grammar Police!
Thank you very much for point out the issues. We address them, all but one, what do you mean with "comma splice"?
Hope we don't get fined. :)
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Hello, grammar is spelt with an "a" not an "e". A comma splice is when you use a comma to break up two clauses which make sense on their own (e.g. I like pizza, it is the best). Instead of a comma, you can either use two sentences (I like pizza. It is the best.) or a semi-colon (I like pizza; it is the best.)