Love the music, especially the cute menu one!
I didn't manage to finish it yet. The art is nice, I like the pet ideas. Actually I think it might have been better if the pets were animals and not cyborgs. It would have made for an interesting contrast owner-pet and how the pet would show the magical girl's human nature.
Not a big fan of the story though but that's just me, I'm very picky with this aspect in many games. I found at some point a story part that ended with 1 choice, I didn't quite understand what was the point of that, it's not like I could have picked anything else.
Also writing related, there were some sentences that didn't make much sense, and sometimes the flow of the paragraph was pretty bad (starting with long sentences, etc).
I liked the UI, it was great to get to read so much at once, rather than pressing a button to read line-by-line. I hate that design, glad to see this was different.
Also the scrollbar is cool too because the line-by-line design usually doesn't give you the option to go back.
I appreciate the small download size.
Thanks for the game :)