The visuals and narrative are professional quality, and the story fits the theme to a tee!
I would recommend not having 100% of the dialogue interactions needed to make progress. Since the text can't be skipped, it would make sense to have a few different dialogues depending on how eager you are to order right away vs being the extrovert and talking with everyone. It could even play into more endings if this game gets expanded!
The last part of the game took me a while to figure out where to go after picking up the knife. I knew the front door was locked so I figured it wouldn't make sense to go back there, but that's where you have to go. Not a big deal though, just had to load the game a few more times.
All in all, marvelous experience!