Was a good read, the dialogue was great. The theme of this is more "civil vs savage" instead of "strength vs intelligence," but well done never the less. I hope you participate in the next jam.
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thank you, I'm planning on it! My intent with the theme was to position the angelic empire as strength (the power of indomitable stone walls, the absolute control held by jailers) and the beastmen as intelligence (knowing how to sneak up on the wall and dig under the damn thing!), but I figured it might be a stretch haha. I'm excited for the next one and might wind up doing a bit more writing about my beastmen army in the meanwhile :)