A few more for the list
- p. 11 Cat, Sabre-tooth statblock, in the line that starts "Dire strike: fangs disembowel", "fangs" should have an initial capital to maintain consistency with the rest of the book
- p. 36 Mimic statblock, same as above for the line that starts "True form: voracious gaping maw"
- p. 6 Bear, Cave statblock, "1d6 Str damage" should be "d6 Str damage" for consistency with the rest of the book.
- p. 18 Deathseer statblock, same as above for "1d4 Souls"
- p. 19 Death Warden statblock, on the first line, "bearded axes (d8 | dual | 30')" the use of vertical lines on either side of "dual" created some confusion at first glance—the relationship between "d8" "dual" and "30'" was not immediately clear. It is also inconsistent with much of the rest of the document where terms like "(d6 blast)" are not separated by a vertical line (although there are some exceptions such as Gargoyle's "Fire Breath (d10 blast | 40')" using a line between "blast" and "40'" but not between "d10" and "blast.") I recommend picking one format for stats and sticking to it for readability.
- On a related note, I noticed Death Warden uses both "30'" and "30ft" and when I looked over the rest of the document to see which was the standard I realised they're used interchangeably throughout. "ft" seems to be the standard in the core rules, so I recommend sticking with that.