This might not be wrong, it could be slangy and the word "and" could just be repeated, but I think in this line from Nancy,
"And… and you planning to pursue anything more serious with her?",
the second "and" was perhaps meant to be an "are".
In the same scene, she says "heavens knows", which should be either "heaven knows" or "heavens know" (number agreement).
(I'll start a new thread after this for any further reports to avoid these lines becoming too narrow.)
Thank you very much!
