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I see! That's a shame. Sigh. And I guess something like iDeal, which is the system the Netherlands uses for online banking, probably is too niche internationally for most such websites to include. Too bad, but understandable.

You're very welcome, and I hope you will get enough support still to continue this way. But if not, and if you do have to move to Steam, I will most definitely buy your game there. Best of luck!

I've tried Prepaid cards before, and they're always a huge pain in my experience. (I tried them before for Kickstarter.) But I will look at the page you linked, hopefully there will be some way for me to contribute still that way. EDIT: Hm, doesn't look like it offers anything I would want to go for, unfortunately…

Annoying is one word for it. Criminal is another that comes to mind. Definitely don't go there!

Patreon intends to keep your $8,000? That has to be basically criminal, doesn't it? That's your money, we didn't intend to give that to Patreon!

Unfortunately I believe I cannot support you on SubscribeStar, as it does not allow PayPal or iDeal or any of the typical payment options available in my country (the Netherlands), where we don't normally have credit cards. Unless I'm missing something! So I'm a little worried what this change will mean for my ability to continue to play your game, nevermind support you further, which I would like to do.

EDIT: Found a link you shared in another comment, but it seems to be talking about prepaid/virtual cards, and I have some bad experiences with those… darn.

I believe it is now possible on Steam to prevent specific games from showing up when you play them. See this page.

This sort of broad-stroke censorship is ridiculously hypersensitive and it will just keep getting worse if people don't stand up to it. Best of luck to you, and I for one will definitely purchase the game on Steam when it comes out over there!

Unfortunately it looks like SubscribeStar allows only debit/credit cards and not PayPal, so it is difficult for me to support you there. But on Steam at least I will.

I can understand that a little bit, but I still think it doesn't seem like that big a deal, and I do think there's quite a difference between the first-hand and the second-hand experience. Anyway, in this case it was hard to avoid, because the scene after that follows from it directly, story-wise.

Yeah I get that, but what's the harm in seeing it talked about, you know you weren't there, you didn't experience it. Doesn't seem like it should affect you much, from where I stand.

Who cares if you don't have to see the scene?

Ooh, I would love that! I'll bear that in mind, thank you :)

Just got started in chapter 1, pity about the Jamie reveal, so few bisexual games out there already (sorry for the mild spoiler, but it's very early on and I looked but can't find a spoiler tag for comments here). Still seems most intriguing so far, I'm excited to keep playing!

Those two are also my favorites! But this game has a lot of good characters.

In the same scene, she says "heavens knows", which should be either "heaven knows" or "heavens know" (number agreement).

(I'll start a new thread after this for any further reports to avoid these lines becoming too narrow.)

This might not be wrong, it could be slangy and the word "and" could just be repeated, but I think in this line from Nancy,

"And… and you planning to pursue anything more serious with her?",

the second "and" was perhaps meant to be an "are".

I think this line from young Penelope also has a space at the start:

" Haha I bet."

You're welcome! There really are barely any, I'm very impressed :) I'll continue reporting them as I come across them.

An extra space before another italicized line:

" Ah, I see you have now begun guarding yourself. Your efforts are futile, however. I will just have to exert myself a little further…"

When Orion first lands in Ogygia, he's thinking to himself, and in this one line the question mark is outside the thinking parentheses:

"(Where am I)?"

Super minor, but there seems to be an extra space at the start of this line from Alex:

" Miss Bardot, congratulations! Would you like to share any words for those young athletes trying to achieve your levels of success?"

The same two lines further in, when she's again taking the role of the interviewer. Presumably because of the italics, but it still looks odd to me.

Hi! I've started playing Eternum, and I'm extremely impressed so far. As promised, I'll report typos I find in here, but honestly it took me forever to even come across the first one! Great job, there.

The one I found was the following line from Millie, where "its" should be "it's" with an apostrophe:

"There's a car in the parking lot that started smoking! It looks like its coming from the engine!"

The comments just here on itch.io, as I did here for OiaL, you mean? OK, got it, I will do that, then :)

Hi! I'm really enjoying this game, I'm nearing the end of it I think. I'm looking forward to playing Eternum next. I did come across a few (not many at all!) typos or other small language mistakes that I wanted to report. I checked the Discord, but it looks like I am now allowed access to any of the channels that might be suitable for such things. Do I just report things I find in here?

For now, the most noticeable one I found is for Aiko's line "(Well… expect for all the other people who are here too!)", where "expect" should be "except".

I'll try to track them all for Eternum when I play through that, so please let me know where the best place would be to report these if I'm not a patron.

Oh right! You know, I saw that a while before actually trying the game, but then forgot about it by the time I actually got to it. Thank you!

This game is absolutely lit. I only wish I could get it to a bigger resolution. Full screen at my 4K screen, that would be ideal, but that might be a bit much. Although I'd be fine with it just stretching the art, of course.

Speaking of the art, it's just wonderful in this game, as are the animations. And the character design is just how I like it, which seems to be very rare, in eroge in particular. Heel goed werk!!

There are moaning sounds, though, right? I already really like them as they are.

Excellent! I also remember coming across some other minor things before, but sadly I wasn't keeping track yet. However, since I think I want to wait with act III a bit until there's more content, I was thinking I would go through the first two acts again (and play a less cruel character and see how that changes things), and this time around if I'll come across anything, I will make a report. Probably just minor typos for the most part (and even those were quite rare!).

I'm new here; are the comments on these updates the best place to make these kinds of reports? EDIT: Never mind, became a patreon & joined the Discord, I see I can report things there :)

One thing I noticed that you might want to change is that when you are spying on the Rinkos once you have become Emperor, and you decide to leave them alone, there is still the line "There's no telling what Luna would do if her guards caught me…". I even Shattered her, so presumably the protagonist should not be worried about that anymore.

Also the line when looking around the East Hallway in the third act is the same as when you just add the upgrade to the manor and nobody is living there yet, which seems odd.

Hope this helps! Really excited for this new act <3

For now it's just the first district, more to come!