I was really excited for whatever you had in store for me! I loved the music, and the portraits at the beginning! I really really wish that I could hold onto the hype after I entered the dungeon.
While I can't actually give you a rating, you did ask for feedback so here it is :)
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This is my rubric:
[ + - - - - ] 1 - Missing
[ + + - - - ] 2 - Somewhat Present
[ + + + - - ] 3 - Present
[ + + + + - ] 4 - Well Done
[ + + + + + ] 5 - Outstanding
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Theme (2/5)[ + + - - - ]
I noticed the oxygen level, but it didn't really seem to have an impact.
Gameplay (2/5)
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The intro song and the class selection got me so hype for the game! I was disappointed when my elementalist/archer team had nothing to their name. On my second attempt I found swords and shields for each. It sort of diminished the hype for me.
Implementation (2/5)
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I killed a demon of some sort, and then kept hearing its audio. I got myself stuck in a part of the dungeon after the door closed behind me with no switches, and no way out. I was done after that.
Presentation (3/5)
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The music was phenomenal! The portraits for the characters were breathtaking (possibly AI generated? Either way, well done)! I scored it as high as I did because of how well the game was sold to me on the outside. I scored it as low as I did because of how hollow it felt in comparison when I entered the dungeon.
Creativity (3/5)
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There was creativity that showed through in your design of the dungeon, its monsters, and the system itself. You took a classic RPG style and gave it a semblance of life. There was nothing particularly unique, which is why I can't score it higher, but I liked what I saw.
It's obvious that a lot of thought, time and effort went into making this game. I think it was a victim of scope-creep. You wanted to do too much, but you couldn't deliver on the expectations you set for yourself, or for your players. I hope that this was a learning experience for you. There were a lot of great elements here that just weren't fully realized. I would love to have you post a video of you playing through it for me. I want to be able to appreciate everything you put into it.