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Okay, visually it's better. Now it needs a short, good visible, text that explains what the game is about / what the player has to do. You can also say: this game is like "the name of a well-known game". So the player knows before paying if he will be interested in this kind of game. If you need a translating machine I can recommend Reverso.

You should look more into your font choice and adding images which aren't just a basic unedited screenshot onto your page.

Also, your game hasn't changed at all. Please read what I said on this post and improve your game with the advice.