I played through your game and ended up taking a lot of screenshots because there were some minor spelling errors I wanted to point out. But I think I took too many screenshots and itch won't let me post my comment. So to not lose everything I put together, I put it in a google doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s7aeZBQQJW1pL88vIiiApZ2M85vKZKlZ3oVVttPVmdk/...