First, I will establish I do not play these types of games often. That being said the cover art is really good so I had to give it a try. There isn't much I can criticize, everything seems to be sufficient. The only thing I felt was missing was choice. I played for maybe 10-15 minutes and there wasn't a time where I could interact or influence the story by choosing. It seemed like that was going to be a feature given the description, so I am confused. But if choice is indeed planned, think it may be worth considering giving the player some intractability earlier in the game even if it isn't a huge impact.