I really enjoyed the graphics and animations here - the whole world felt very recognizable and I thought that was pretty impressive for a first game made in Bitsy!
I found it pretty distracting that the music was disabled during each screen transition - I'm not sure whether that's a limitation of Bitsy or not, but I eventually disabled the music because it was cutting out a lot. It's also not totally clear to me how the gameplay related to the 'penalized' theme, but that's alright :)
Fun writing! Felt like the writing, visuals, and music all had a cohesive style that fit well together.