I like the silly opening video. Were the typos intentional? Also, nice job with the voice acting, the enthusiasm was great.
The dialogue seemed a little odd and unnatural.
I really don't like walking simulators where the environment is all the same. Even Slenderman had buildings and landmarks to help you know where you had and hadn't explored. Give me a big, gnarled tree, a bunch of pointy rocks, a cloudy pond, etc. These would make the creepy forest even creepier, and help me orient myself.
The creepy audio and crisp walking and eating noises were nice, but the dialogue's volume was not balanced. I struggled to hear the opening lines from the friend, so I turned my volume wayyy up, only for there to be screaming from the right side moments later. That was a very unpleasant experience.
I was able to beat the game fairly easily, but I never saw a monster or anything. I heard the creepy music, but it just stopped after awhile.
I played a second time and tried to die. I collected no food, ran around until the number reached zero, and stayed perfectly still when the creepy music started. Nothing happened.
The ending was kinda interesting, but the odd dialogue kept it from being great. If you'd asked my name. or used the authentication feature to grab it automatically, it would have been more impactful.
Thank you for sharing your game, and good luck with future projects!