I think this was a very solid submission! The artwork was great, the game mechanics itself was a really great idea and worked well. Maybe I had some issues at some parts, figuring out which powers I had and how to use them, maybe tutorial level for that would work (especially with different powers).
The narration was good, but sometimes I missed what he said and then I didn't really know what to do. End of the final level that I get the power to go through the other doors, it took me a while to understand what I was supposed to do.
I feel like this is the kind of game that with polishing and more work could actually become a full on game that you could sell on Steam. Start a devlog on youtube or something to get people interested and sooner than you know you'll have a game selling on Steam! :)