Hey, thanks a lot for the feedback! A lot of your thoughts seem to mirror my own with where I think the game is at right now, so I hope the changes and additions I'm making to the writing are going in the right direction~
Hey! I swung back around to check out where this game had gone, and I just want to say I'm really impressed with how much you've added. I like what you've done (Hiroko is especially adorable), and so many aspects of the original feedback I gave have been nicely addressed. I will say that a lot of the paths are currently on the shorter side (though very enjoyable), but I see from the flowchart you have posted that there's a lot of stuff planned. I'm looking forward to future additions ^.^