This is a neat l'il experiment. Short, but with all the text and the ways things connect, I can't fault it for that. I did find a couple of spelling errors, but nothing worth complaining about. And while I'm not really a fan of the "the weird kid nobody likes is a serial killer" angle, the tension of the game was engaging enough for me to forgive it. Overall, I liked it. :)
I'd appreciate it if you could find the time to check out my own entry, The Chronicles of Mega-Mart! It's nowhere near as heavy as this, but I hope you enjoy it all the same! :)
https://itch.io/jam/advjam2023/rate/2109372