You do capture how good games can be when all the hotspots aren't labeled and you actually have to explore the environment. The puzzles were interesting and a nice level of challenging without being too frustrating. I would have preferred sticking with one character's story. To me, the skipping around between characters and stories made me less emotionally invested in any of them.
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Yeah 100%. Bit of an experiment doing a "middle" part of a story for a game jam. Resolving previous stuff and set up for future stuff without the payoff haha. I realise now that the next part planned is actually perfect scope for a standalone jam game, following one character with a standalone story arc... Ah well! Side effect of trying to do a big story in little jams, but always learning!