I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Story (3):
The story feels complete, as if there is a a typical 3-act structure. The set up before the diner scene, before they go into the club and the club itself.
All of the choices feel satisfying and realistic. The writing was overall engaging.
I don’t think I need to go into a lot of details here considering this is the only submission to the jam where my first impressions were recorded live and uploaded for the internet to listen to.
Presentation (1):
I think a few more music tracks could’ve been used to break up the monotony.
It’s kind of underwhelming to just have the character in the middle of the screen for an entire scene just changing clothes or emoting, times three.
The pink room used for the meat of the VN was boner-killing.
Creativity (3):
I think the concept of exploring your sexuality away from the MY WOLF is neat. There are three very different flavors of BDSM.
This is also the first time a MY WOLF power-bottoms the MC so at minimum, you deserve 3 stars for this. I can’t even think of any other VN’s with power-bottoming to begin with.
Total (7):
This earns a solid 12’th place out of 17 for me. This is the point in my ratings where if you put a metaphorical gun to my head and told me to 👍 or 👎, I’ll be giving them a 👍 instead of a 👎.
I wish I didn’t have to censor the goods with Ranok but YouTube is a necessary evil for us.