I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Story (3):
So time for the truth. I was unfortunately spoiled about the main twist of the VN. I saw other people posting the custom sprites but I thought it was going to be a twist where the WOLF was an alien, not a anime.
It accomplishes what it sets out to be which is a small taste of what the main plot will be.
I hope that the MC gets to be able to fight instead of just being on the side-lines.
Presentation (2):
The fight scene was great and so were the drawn sprites but I really could not take this VN to the appropriate level of seriousness because the sprites don’t look like high schoolers.
I do appreciate the attempt to make your VN stand out a little via the background filters.
Creativity (3):
Well, I can’t really think of any other FVN’s are an Anime World Battle Royal but the vast majority of it is just an homage to Route 65. (My least favorite thing that Echo Project has ever made.) The only Anime World Battle Royal that I’ve watched a lot of as kid was Zatch Bell!.
So I think that specific Monster of the Week style, concept can go pretty far and become easily episodic.
Total (8):
I’m looking forward to whatever you decide to turn this into.
Whatever it does become, I know it will have a dope UI and dope effects.