I think the game is okay
Agni really got on my nerves a lot, and I found that there were a couple of typos and a few times the background was acting weird ((I got Aaron's sleeping CG in the middle of the laughing part with Seth. I'm uncertain if that was intentional or not.)) It was also difficult to discern whether or not a person was talking or if it was inner dialogue; this is because of the changing font colors and the name on the notepad not showing up at times.
Otherwise, it's an okay game 👍
1 year ago (+1)
Hello! I apologize for my late reply. I was busy taking screenshots of any moments which occurred to have a mistake: Typo, odd CG, incorrect font color, and improper grammar.
There are many things that I have taken note of by analyzing the text and imagery. Which is why I present to you my discord, ((removed)) . This message would drag on for far too long if I noted *every* small detail I found.
This image happened to show up both times I replayed this scene. As I have stated in my previous message, I am uncertain if this was intentional or an error.
Improper spelling and grammar
"I try to speak up using all my strenght"
I bolded the word which was misspelled. Additionally, you may also see that there is no punctuation.
There are other occasions that I have found to have minor mistakes, such as these...
The font color does not indicate someone is speaking, however, Seth later replies to this 'inner dialogue'. This implies that it was spoken aloud.
When Agni is speaking to the Protagonist, she is portrayed to be a teasing and smug character. It wouldn't come to be a surprise if she used slang while speaking, although, I find that the words are not similar to slang such as "t'is" or "it's". Furthermore, it has become apparent to me that this game often makes mistakes such as leaving out punctuation.
Hence why I believe "t's" is a typo.
1 year ago(+2)
Pardon me if I come off as arrogant or possibly even rude. I do not particularly have experience with criticizing others, but I do have a strong desire to inform people of my personal opinion on some matters.
1 year ago(+2)
No !Not rude at all! Thank you very much for Pointing out the mistakes!I will try to fix them in the new update! Also thank you very much for taking your time to look for them ,it was very nice of you!You are a great help!