A striking opener with a gripping hook. Middle sentence with a smooth transition! Please give me money, and you can, too!
You may be wondering how we got here. And that sucks, doesn't it? It's okay to admit that. Smooth transition to the conclusion!
That's all, but I haven't hit my word count yet. I wish it weren't so. Please help - this scholarship will pay for 1/27th of my tuition!
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Love all the individual text boxes. The format of the game really brings across the whole sisyphean task. Great work, and congrats on a poignant and finished 3rd game! :D