Holy shit this presentation is ~decadent~. It feels like every three or four lines of dialogue there's some new bespoke image asset or change to the background to accentuate the feelings in the story. I can't imagine how much work this was, but the end result is drop-dead gorgeous. Dead Girl's Notebook was already insane with the VN presentation stuff but this goes several levels harder.
Cried a lot at the story!! I think this is your strongest writing so far. You crunched hard to make this but it doesn't feel at all like a jam game, it feels totally finished and uncompromised. I seriously can't imagine making a VN this long, this asset-intensive, and this polished in just three and a half months, it makes perfect sense that you need a break after all that.
Really really appreciate the intensity of violence and gore in the first chapter. I think if you'd played that more softly it would've cheapened the impact of the rest of the story. The smut and violent scenes in general are really delightful and well-done; the chuuni-as-hell chapter 5 fight is a highlight for sure.
Thanks for making this, friend <3 Dead Girl's Notebook was a huge joyful surprise to me when I played it, it's very wonderful that your follow-up VN is so fleshed out and excellent. Please don't feel like you need to one-up this scope/presentation next time or I think you might die in real life