Really enjoyed this - fun concept and great visuals. I liked the intro and how the game was presented at the stat.
You can see the potential in this, but I think it's clear that perhaps time was an issue to get everything in and working. I fell off the airship part way through and still survived while holding a baby, then did the deliveries by run running around. Nice to see the town's details, however I'm pretty sure that's not how it's meant to be played ;)
I think it would help with a hole or something in the ship to see what you're above while using the rudder, which I must admit was a little confusing at the start, I didn't realise the rudder was usable to start with.
All in all, I enjoyed it and I think given more time and more visibility from the ship, I think it'll make a great game.