A great idea and concept and the art style is loyal to papers please as well. The main issue is the gameplay. Its quite repetetive and all of the "skill check" actions have the same movement (going forward and then backwards). There wasn't much use of the map either (other than lore purposes, I guess perhaps a functionality where the people ask for a specific area passport was intended).
However, overall its still a very creative idea and with some more development, the gameplay can be made more enjoyable. Its still a good attempt given the time limit.
If possible could you check out my game? Any feedback would be appreciated.