1. wow the art was impressive, cant believe you made the art so quickly (specifically the girls animation was pretty impressive for being so quick). I love the random picture taken at a theater. by far the funniest part
2. the ui especially in the beginning was well placed and intuitive
3. a few bugs were encountered during play, crashes when you hit save for example or hit pref while playing
4. I think the game could be improved a lot if the player could see what the deck of cards are even if they get shuffled up or something. Otherwise its just trial and error. I think improving the card mechanic part would make the visual novel format more fun as a game.
5. the writtng was not bad. Obviously it was written pretty quick but I think the concept could have legs with a few more mechanics
6. the music was great