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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Presentation | #1416 | 3.608 | 3.857 |
| Overall | #2085 | 3.229 | 3.452 |
| Creativity | #2206 | 3.341 | 3.571 |
| Enjoyment | #2864 | 2.739 | 2.929 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
A Visual Novel where you alter the choices rather than picking them.
Did your team create the vast majority of the art during the 48 hours?
Yes
We created the vast majority of the art during the game jam
Did your team create the vast majority of the music during the 48 hours?
Yes
We created the vast majority of the music during the game jam
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Comments
Really loved the animated sprite (first RenPy game I saw do this, actually) and the music! The writing is pretty good, and it was fun to replay the game and see what all of the choices lead to.
The UI, especially the choice menu, could use some polish. Don't think the Bauhaus font fits here, though that's more of a nitpick.
Overall, nice visual novel. Good job!
For some reason the UI seemed bland, but i assume most time went into the really cool loking love interest art and animation. A cool teaser if the game gets developed more!
Fun game, fun idea, it is pretty and the music is really good, probably because it resembles some of the electric music I listen to sometimes.
history breaks btw
Overall it was awesome, good job :3
1. wow the art was impressive, cant believe you made the art so quickly (specifically the girls animation was pretty impressive for being so quick). I love the random picture taken at a theater. by far the funniest part
2. the ui especially in the beginning was well placed and intuitive
3. a few bugs were encountered during play, crashes when you hit save for example or hit pref while playing
4. I think the game could be improved a lot if the player could see what the deck of cards are even if they get shuffled up or something. Otherwise its just trial and error. I think improving the card mechanic part would make the visual novel format more fun as a game.
5. the writtng was not bad. Obviously it was written pretty quick but I think the concept could have legs with a few more mechanics
6. the music was great
Thank you for the detailed feedback! Hoping that after the voting period, some bug fixing will already be underway. I really enjoyed developing this concept and believe this is just the beginning for something cooler, particularly the card concept.
Pretty straight-forwardly backwards. I wish it had some replay value, but for the few minutes that it takes to play, it’s neat!
I don't like graphical novels but the idea is great. I can see this being expanded in the future!