I like the writing and the comic aspect of the game. Felt like it needed something to improve the pace, but reading the stories and the outcomes was fun. Maybe it would be nice if we had just a bit more information about the characters on the first playthrough, enough to be able to have small wins (I failed 5 out of 5 in my first and second playthroughs haha).
That being said, the character building after each playthrough does add to the game, though, like a "story roguelite" of sorts. This was a very creative and funny game. Great job!