Hi Bored Cube, it's always a pleasure to see and hear you.
There are some passages that I love: 1'05 to 1'15 and after 1'55. These passages are well mixed and sound great.
You also surprised me with your bass, which doesn't play what's usually expected of it: the root note. And that, harmonically, is great.
There are still passages where the notes are too loud, or where two instruments play in the same medium register. This "saturates" the note frequency and makes listening more confusing. Perhaps you could change the octave of one of the instruments to make the melodies more distinct.
I hope you find this feedback useful.
In any case, I liked it