You definitely have the pinball vibe, as you use actual pinball sounds. I always find that interesting - if people use actual sounds in their songs. Nice of you to sample it and use it to the beat, instead of spread it randomly. Though the start sounds like a typewriter to me xD
I think the song is a bit repetitive for 4 and a half minutes; it would be better if it was a bit shorter imo. But the song is simple and nice. Well done :)