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(3 edits)

Content: 8 of 10.  Great! 
I will be bringing this to my players as an option. 1 point lost for type-os. 1 point lost for "Community Events" being potentially devastating and always negative. I'm not sure why the players should be punished for advancing their Standing within the community. "Thanks for building that orphanage ... did that kid just summon a demon?"

Layout and Design: 2 of 10 Boring.  
Times New Roman font, incorrectly background color "Designed for use with ShadowDark RPG.  The page margin are set to the default setting instead of being very narrow to allow more content on each page. Headers aren't big enough because of this. It's also very noticeable when it comes to the tables not being justified based on the content within the cells, columns, or rows.  Some text needs to be center aligned vertically and horizontally within their cells.   +1 point for the only two images in the pdf being quite good and evocative.