It's a good start, the formatting and layout could use a bit more work to really bring it up so it looks and feels "official". The map is really where more work needs to be invested however.
Thanks for the feedback. This was written in an effort to avoid costs. I'm down for investing the $$$ into the work, but since this was my first ever attempt at publishing, I wanted to see where I stood, so to speak. If things look promising, I'll be going all in!