Things I love:
- There is a lot of content and world building here.
- The inkerate map looks good.
Things I don't love so much:
- there is no printer-friendly version for us ink-conscious folks? 😅
- I'd like to see the page margins narrower so the font can be made larger?
- Looks too similar to a 5e adventure in layout and doesn't make use of the "Designed for Shadowdark RPG" image I've come to expect on the title page. The design/layout could use some work to be more inline with Shadowdark's vibes.
- Metric system. I love it for science but it doesn't feel medieval fantasy to me. "My horse is 8 heads high and my arm 3 feet." metric feels too scientific and clean for peasant folk.
Looks good otherwise. Solid 4 out of 5 imo.